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Sunday, 3 April 2016

Writing portfolio post

Description: I chose this post because I wanted to explain maybe how some cabins feel with people inside of them. And Camp inspired me to write about what goes on in girls cabins maybe people would like to know. I thought it would be interesting to also write a bit about cabins friend toilet. I wanted to really hook the readers in by writing  about something not many people write about. 

Feedback I think you did really well at your writing  FeedFoward next time I think you should tell the reader a little about your story. Tayla 

Evaluation: It was easy to think of some good words to use in my story to really spice it up. It was hard to think of more words from when I had like 3 Pages I didn't know what to do for the fourth. 

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