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Thursday, 31 March 2016

Camp Writing

Description: I chose to write about the girls cabin because I thought it would be fun for readers to know a silly story about what goes on in our cabin because maybe some people want to actually kno and I wanted to stand up for cabin and tell you guys why he is angry and the un specified toilet and I wanted it to be a fun make up story AND I can tell you now some of those hints happen... I'll leave you with that! Thanks for reading my story! 

Feedback and feedfoward : I like how you have highlighted the different people but next time you could put it in parigraphs 

1 comment:

  1. I think a good next step is around the use of paragraphs Charlotte! This helps make it easier to read and understand for the audience.