Charlotte's Tweets

Wednesday, 4 March 2015



Purpose: To describe an interesting character so we can tell a story about them at the Marae stay.

WALT: Entertain (character description)


Think of a character you could write about.

Draw them.  

Introduce your character in an entertaining way.

Describe their looks.  

Describe their personality.  

I think/feel statement (Conclusion / Summary)

Criteria: I can

Self Assessment

Descriptive vocabulary (words that help to SHOW the reader)

  • use a range of verbs

Language features (phrases that help paint a picture)

  • select one or two similes

  • use onomatopoeia to show sounds

  • select words that start with the same sound (alliteration)

My writing is 2-3 paragraphs (100 - 200 words)

Learning Partner Comment

Feedback: I love the way how you say I am telling you in an entained 


Feedforward: Next time you could put some sound effects in it 

Name: Kate 

Overall, how well do you think your learning partner has done?

9 out of 10 because you could put some sound effects in there . 😄

 Your dad is strong so I'm telling you now don't kick him. Other wise you end up in a big battle  and what will happen to you... He kicks you but nothing happens but he has you in his eyes
you look in them  but you look kinda sad now but he's thinking of the sadness of you crying .so now you're be thinking how Nice he is so you go an and describe him your story. 

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